Tamzin I absolutely love your game. It is very colourful and fun! Maybe if you could you might be able to get the score to change and add in some more obstacles!
Tia
7/7/2014 10:45:40 pm
Tamzin I Love you game so much and it is so fun. I really like how to did your own design of a tv show. It is very colourful.
When you finish a level you don't get any points but when you die you lose points. Also, it needs more thing that make you die
Jamie
7/7/2014 10:45:52 pm
Well done Tamzin I like the part where you put in the dot in level one to make it a bit harder to get to level two.
I think you could improve on level two and three by making it a bit harder because you can just go straight down the middle.
Hannah
7/7/2014 10:58:06 pm
Fantastic Tamzin I really like your game because you have lots of levels also it is really colourful.
However, I think you could add some more dots and maybe have some brighter colours to make it look affective.
Lauren
7/7/2014 10:58:14 pm
I really like your game because it is really colourful. Also, I like how you have lots of Levels.
I think you could improve by making it faster. Another thing, you could improve is by making it a bit harder.
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