Check out these 'super sentences' from this week's Big Writing!.
Can you spot why I like them so much?
"Eventhough I have lost faith in him ever coming back, I still think he will come Back." (Drew)
"Instead of hope, I had courage. Therefore, I went into the Chief's office and asked him. "Hey! Y' know how Billy has gone?" I asked. (Tamzin)
"I needed to lie down, therefore I walked swiftly up the crooked stairs and went in my room. Carefully, I lay in my bed while thinking "What if Billy never came back? It will be like he never existed." (Anais)
"Also, the cows are not milking right. I don't know if they are not eating properly or is it they miss Billy?" (Kieran)
"It is so unfair. Dad and Billy can go on the gig however no girls are allowed. Do you think that is unfair?"
"Dad is getting tired of milking cows eventhough the cows are dairy and we need to eat and drink" (Allana)