Arguing to stay on Bryher is a very tricky task and I am pleased that some of your feel confident that you can convince us all that we should stay.
Here is a fantastic paragraph from Roan!
It does everything to challenge our point of view. He gives us plenty of examples of why we should stay and uses questioning effectively to challenge our thoughts.
Well done Roan! (Brilliant use of openers too!)
Here is a fantastic paragraph from Roan!
It does everything to challenge our point of view. He gives us plenty of examples of why we should stay and uses questioning effectively to challenge our thoughts.
Well done Roan! (Brilliant use of openers too!)
First, I am staying because there are so many precious memories. I can even remember my 10th birthday. Another thing I can remember is when Dad and Billy used to ride the gig together. It would be so sad to leave it all behind. In addition to this, I remember me and Billy milking the cows. Also, the 10 storms I have been here to see. Wouldn't you be sad if you left it all behind? Wouldn't you rather remember all of the memories than forget them? I know I would rather remember them.
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