Well done Sophie, you have managed to use iMovie to create your advert. You have collected and used a lot of different images of rides. Would you have been better using captions showing the excitements of the park visitors instead of saying that they are good inventors or engineers?
sophie
11/15/2013 03:39:53 am
Thank you Mr Patterson.
M Patterson
11/15/2013 03:58:09 am
It's good to see you leaving comments on the blog Sophie. I am glad that you enjoyed this unit and making your own theme park advert :-)
sophie
11/29/2013 09:40:08 pm
Don't worry Mr Patterson I will always leave comments on the blog
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.