Boys, you have used many of the features we talked about in your advert. Your ending is really convincing, showing a lot of the excitement and fun to be had in your park. Im not sure about the start. What were your short video clips meant to show us?
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.