I like the PicCollage photos that you have included at the start of your advert Roan. They are great! It is a shame that you didn't have more of them because you use some of the photos at the end quite a few times. Your theme park looks really exciting.
Mrs Ovington
10/22/2013 07:23:47 am
A fantastic advert Roan, you have used lots of pictures of your friends on the rides. I would like to have heard what you were saying on your video clip though!
luke
11/5/2013 09:48:39 pm
that was exelant Roan but I would like to hear you speak and come and see my blog at http://kidblog.org/Mrs_Illume/author/luke369931/
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.