Your page is very pink and you have included lots of facts about the pigs in Minecraft. However, you must remember to use capital letters at the beginning of a sentence as well as for names, yours especially!
I like how you described pigs in a very interesting way. With the M slanting a lot, It got a little difficult to see and understand what it is. Pigs are great and have lots of facts about them.
HI!
Minecraft is my favorite game and pigs are my favorite animal and they are cute. I dont't kill pigs. I have rode a pig before in minecraft. I play minecraft a lot.
Pigs are amazing because they drop food and you can ride them.
From Oliver
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.