Well done Rachel you have lots of persuasive language in your television advert such as "opportunity of a life time" and "5 star rating". My favourite was "When fun is at your door, use it" A great way to promote how much fun your theme park is!
Good use of Picture editing as well Rachel.
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.