Mr Patterson
10/22/2013 03:22:56 am
Great Nathan, you have thought carefully about which parts of the park to promote in your advert. I really liked the photographs that you had edited in PicCollage. I found pictures from the actual park more convincing than photos from the classroom. Maybe they would have been better as short videos.
Miss Hemmings
10/22/2013 07:04:37 am
Your short film works really well. I liked the way you used people's expressions to enhance your film. Well done. Comments are closed.
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