Well done Lucy. You have created a fun and happy feeling advert to promote your park. You have included pictures and video clips to support your advert buy it would have been nice to see some PicCollage edited images as well. I really like your start "The World's best theme park, the World's best day out". It really makes me want to find out more.
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.