Fantastic kieran, i really like your trailer ,it was probaley the most interesting one i have ever seen.
Mr Patterson
10/22/2013 06:10:56 am
Well done Kieran. A great advert for your theme park. You were the first one to finish today and usually this would make me worry. However, you have put a lot of care into your video and have made excellent use of the short videos to support the promotion of your park! I particularly like the "Amazing" quote at the very end of the advert because it is a strong image that will stick in the viewer's minds long after watching your work.
Great job Kieran.
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.