Very proud of you Drew, well done. I'm pleased your iPad off Santa has come in handy :-)
Just been on your blog Drew great work!!
Drew, your website is excellent. Your persuasive writing on your homepage gives plenty of reasons for visitors to stay on your site! I was very impressed that you finished most of this in your own time, at home as well! Excellent job. We will have to get a flag counter on before your holiday too.
Drew, I can't believe how quickly you have updated your page to include you dragon instructions.
One tip however. Can you put a small picture of a dragon with a sentence of two explaining that you have been learning about writing instructions and here is your instructions for looking after a dragon? That way your readers know why it is there.
Well done drew I'm very impressed with ur blog
Please try to use 'your' instead of 'ur' Roan. Have you considered adding details about your own holiday to your own website. It would be interesting to see how Drew's and your own compare.
Mr Patterson I have had someone from America visit my site and it wasn't me I'm still at Manchester!!
Excellent news Drew. You can add another American visit if you get the chance. Have a great trip. Looking forward to any updates you are able to make.
If are able to update your holiday page, leave a comment and I will get an alert! Then I can share it with the class.
Have a great time.
WOW! Drew can't wait to hear what happens when you see the whales and dolphins. Have a great trip!
Mr Patterson I have updated my website but I'm going to have to put pictures from my iPad on at home!
I am able to put pictures on my blog I didn't think I would be able to but I can so i will put some on today hopefully!
Its great to see what you are doing, and being able to read updates while you were on holiday Drew! We love it and cant wait for pictures (but not too many; remember text is more informative for us)
Can you use brackets or a which/who clause in your next entry?
We went on Space Mountain, which was extremenly fast, after our lunch.
We went on Space Mountain (it was extremely fast) after our lunch.
Like your website drew keep updating it ill keep you updated with the scores on Saturday
Can I ask you A question? Can you put a flag counter from America on our blogs? please! I just think that it would be so cool!
I think what Rachel is asking Drew, is can you visit some of the class websites so that they collect a visit from the USA on their flag counters...
The scary ride you tried at Universal Studios sounds interesting. Who went on it with you?
Hi drew football is cancelled tomorrow so at least you miss less games
I have went onto everyone's blog that are published (so they all have an American visit and flag)!
Thanks Drew, I'm sure everyone will appreciate that! I will let them know on Monday. You seem to be collecting quite a few visits too from the UK; must be the holiday diary (I know I keep checking)
Have a great weekend.
drew on your work it is fantastic
Fantastic! Your slideshows are excellent Drew! I will show them to the class on Monday morning and direct them to your site. Hopefully you'll see more visits too from out blogging partners.
Looks nice and wet on Saturday... No different here (but probably a lot cooler).
Can't wait for the next update
wow i have just seen your site it is fantastic you're site just blew me away.it's amazing how you have 46 visitors from Great Britain and 14 from America.(i'm so jeaulous because i only have 13 from Great Britain and none from America)
WOW your holiday sounds AMAZING i would love to go there some time maby i can go next year ?
Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer. Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.
Curriculum: E Safety
Curriculum: Global Awareness
Curriculum: Pupil Personal Webpages
Curriculum Using Ipads In Education
Pupil: Jamie M
Pupil: Jamie T
Pupil: Shay C
Pupil: Shay D
Topic The Wreck Of The Zanzibar