I really enjoyed your advert Drew. I think you have captured the more thrilling and scary side of your park which will appeal to adults and thrill seekers alike. Your advert would be great at this time of year (close to Halloween) especially with the focus on the haunted house element of your park.
Could you have used a few more PicCollage modified images towards the end? Maybe a picture with a scared looking Drew would slot in nicely at this point.
Great job Drew!
Jamie m
11/5/2013 08:12:42 pm
Drew I really enjoyed your iMovie.
Amy Year 7
11/6/2013 04:53:24 am
Absolutely Fabulous Drew keep your good work up and i hope you are enjoying you ipads as much as we did i miss mine xx
Jamie M
11/6/2013 07:53:22 pm
Drew I really liked your iMovie you must of worked hard on it
we'll done
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.