Well done Brynn you have made a really good game I like your background and the way you have set it out.
I think you could improve on your game by making it a bit harder and some more levels.
Lauren
7/7/2014 10:23:53 pm
WOW! Brynn your game is really cool I like how when you touch a spot it takes you back to the start.
However, I think that you could make your tank a little bit smaller. Also, you could add a bit more colour to the 2nd level.
Alicia
7/7/2014 10:24:11 pm
Well done Brynn it is a really good game I loved all the vibrant colours and the tank you made very well done.
However, next time could you try to make it a bit harder with more obstacles to doge.
allana
7/7/2014 10:24:44 pm
WOW, Brynn your game is fab how long did it take you to get it to work? I think that you xcan make it better by if you die then you should go back to the starts.
Amie
7/7/2014 10:25:40 pm
well done Brynn this is a very good game I really think that you could upgrade this game because of how easily you can play it maybe add a enemy or more thing to crash into.
very well done it really is good maybe you should add slug slime on.
Elle
7/7/2014 10:26:43 pm
Brynn your game is cool! you could have had put some more levels on. As well, your game is fun with the tank and your game has got lots of bright colours on.
brett
7/7/2014 10:54:18 pm
well done Bryn I love your game as well as you sprite however you could improve on is add an enemy
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Brooke
7/7/2014 10:59:02 pm
WOW Brynn i think the person you have made is fantastic
and I like that you have used lots of colour. I think
that you should make it harder because it is a bit to easy for us I really like it but it just needs to be a bit harder.
Rebecca
7/7/2014 10:59:21 pm
brynn I liked your game and like the layout also I liked all there vibrant colours however you could add more levels and take some of the red things away
Drew
7/7/2014 10:59:38 pm
well done Brynn your game has good graphics however you could improve it by putting more levels!
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