Well done Brynn! You have taken a lot of care putting your advert together. What stood out for me was your "best ride ever" video clip. I think I would love to visit your park!
Mrs Ovington
10/22/2013 07:19:43 am
You concentrated really well on your advert today, well done!
brynn
10/25/2013 04:43:21 am
I saw my un fill and I show my mam and she like it saw my dad
Amie
11/6/2013 08:05:18 pm
What a cool attractive video I really got in to it I bet you put a lot of effort into it.
jack year 4
11/9/2013 02:41:24 am
Well done brynn you done very well SCARY RIDE!
Mrs Trewick
11/20/2013 01:20:26 am
Fantistic adventure Brynn. Mrs Trewick.
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.