I like that you have used your advert to take the viewer through the rides of the park Brooke. You have made good use of PicCollage to edit some of your photos. Could you have used some video clips of people enjoying themselves or giving their opinions on the park?
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.