I like that you have focused your advert on just one ride and started with a questions "Dare you ride the Dragon?" Just make sure that you read your work back Aron. The iPad has a nasty habit of changing your words to ones that you didn't really want to use.
Mrs Ovington
10/22/2013 07:33:22 am
A great advert Aron! The caption 'Discover the secrets within', makes me want to visit the park just to find out what exactly the secrets are.
aron alderson
11/5/2013 07:41:46 pm
it the best thing in the world also spooky
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.