Well done Anais! You have some excellent PicCollage images in your video as well as some sensible pictures of the theme park! I wonder if your advert could have been improved if you had included some short video clips of people explaining how they enjoyed the rides or what they felt like.
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.