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Can you use openers, punctuation and connectives to create a sentence as excellent as the one Anais used in science this week? Remember capital letters and full stops are still needed online. "In addition to this, your plant will need sunlight to make the food therefore sunlight is very important." Anais Little.
12 Comments
Rachel s 09/16/2013 11:44am
I love that sentence it really reminds me about how to help a plant grow and I LOVE the word therefore Mr Temple 09/16/2013 1:28pm
Super use of In addition with the comma in the right place! Rachel s 09/17/2013 12:05am
Mr Patterson I would like to try an up leveled sentence: HANNNAH 09/17/2013 4:46am
GOOD LUCK RACHEL M Patterson 09/17/2013 12:17am
Well done Rachel! Pleased to see you're starting the day by getting your brain warmed up for the days activities. It always good to see up levelled sentences in subjects other than literacy. hannah 09/17/2013 4:38am
super sentence anais what a sentence!! anais 09/17/2013 4:39am
Mr patterson you have really embarrest me Lauren 09/17/2013 4:39am
Anais Great sentance blew my mind WOW! HANNAH 09/17/2013 4:46am
I LOVE YOUR SENTENCE I WISH I COULD BEAT THAT Mr Patterson 09/17/2013 5:35am
It's great to see positive feedback! It would be even better if you could explain what you liked about Anais sentence. What do you think she has done well? Tamzin 09/17/2013 9:32am
Great sentence Anais I WISH I could think of a sentence that FANTASTIC!! alicia 09/18/2013 4:47am
GREAT sentece anais WISH I COULD DO ONE AS GOOD AS YOURS Comments are closed.
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