Allana I really like your game. I really like your backdrops because they are really colourful and also I like how, when you get on to another level. Maybe you could improve the first level because you get stuck and you can't get through and you end up dying. Also, you could improve it by adding even more levels.
Rachel
7/7/2014 10:54:35 pm
Allana your scratch game is very fun! I like all the colours! As well as all the collectables on level three! Maybe on your next game you could add collectables in every level and more obstacles! I like this a lot because it is colourful! Maybe next time you can make it harder!
sophie
7/7/2014 10:55:52 pm
I really liked you designs however I counld move the carator
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