I really like the feel of your advert Alicia. It makes me feel happy and want to visit your park so that I can feel the same. I love that your photos appear like holiday snaps although could you have created some more so that the same ones don't keep appearing. Lovely advert, well done!
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Welcome to Year 5's blog at Tanfield Lea Community Primary School, a primary school in County Durham who want to broaden our horizons and to show the world what we have to offer.
Our September topic will be 'The Normans', looking at the history of the Norman periods and what we can learn about that time period using primary and secondary sources.
Our literacy will be based on the book 'Goodnight Mr Tom' by Michelle Magorian which takes place during the Second World War.